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Monday, May 18, 2020

Soar story

Ones upon a time there was a 10 year old girl name Marry she loves making mini aeroplane to
fly and her dream was to become a pilot when she was about to fly it she needs to go on
the mountain not far from her country just outside to the field she was very excited
to fly it to the sky so she put all of her stuff at the table and threw her aeroplane to the
sky when it was at the air it fall down she thinks that there's something wrong with
it so she brings it at the table when she takes a look at her paper to see if something wrong with it.


She thinks it's pretty cool but the wind came and tried to fly the paper away luckily Marry stopped it.
She was really upset when it failed. When she dropped it something fell on her head. It was a mini
bag and it was so cute. She looked at it closely and she realised who it belongs to.
And why did it fall from the sky when she was about to grab it a flying machine fell down the
sky and scared her, then she wondered why everything was falling from the sky. She was really
shocked because when she looked very closely at the flying machine then she saw
something that no one has seen before.


She was shocked to see him he was a miniature boy and also he was really cute but
when it got out of his aeroplane he ran towards the tiny backpack he was trying to
pull it but it stop and looked at Marry like she was a giant monster, he was really
scared that he picked up her pencil and try to scare her with it but she wasn't scared, but she
was staring at him even if he moves in front of the bag so she take a picture of him then she saw
him trying to go back to his flying machine with the tiny bag.

Jack was pulling his very heavy bag closer to his flying machine then when he got there
he pull his flying machine down when it was moving it did fall but it broke he was really
upset so he tries to fix it but then he look at the sky and he began to feel really sad Marry
look to then she was surprised to see so many of them then she realise that he needs to
go back to his family then Jack tried to call them so they can help but they were very high
to hear him then he looked at Marry again Marry was upset as well but then she realise
that the miniature boy was looking at her again.

Jack move backwards slowly so she wouldn't get him but he fell down to the ground then he saw the pencil and lift it up to point at her but Marry tried to tell him to not be scared then she think, then she have a plan but first she needs to grab her pencil then she put it on Jack's blowing wheel from the flying machine then he realise that she is a creature too so she put more and tape them together Jack thinks her idea was great so they tested it, but first Jack needed to checked the where to fly it then Marry needs to ready the rope the rope was the engen so it will spin.

It was all ready so Marry pull the rope out it was working for a second then it pop right out but then she have a brand new idea, she thinks that putting her aeroplane mix with Jack´s flying machine will work but this time Jack wasn't sure if that will work but they want to try so Marry threw it to the air it was flying but something went wrong with it he was happy for a moment then it falls.

Marry was really worried and hope his OK when Jack pop out feeling dizzy like he is about to throw up, then he look back and saw they were getting far and far away then he look at her if she have more ideas but she have no more then Jack feel like he want to sit alone upset Marry thinks that she would do the same thing, then the wind came and blow her paper close to her she hold it really hard that the wind comes again and blow it it almost block her face but the paper gives her a great plan she connected it to the flying machine and she is going to pull the flying machine like a kite, but still Jack was scared again because he thinks he is going to fall.

So Marry started to pull and walk then when she looks back the flying machine was flying Jack look if he is floating and he was very proud of her as he is getting higher and higher Marry let go of the rope then Jack began to be happy again as he made it where his family were he was very glad Marry help him and know they are altogether it is time for them to do the star ceremony to rise that's why the bag was so heavy because inside it was the star he was ready to rise it to the air then they push it to the sky then the others did the same when it was time for Marry to go back home she notice a bright light then she look up and saw stars glowing like someone open it.

Alvin has a plan to show who put all the stars by pointing a direction that will make the star blink then she was happy. THE END


2 comments:

  1. Hi Vernon i really like your story i also really like the picture the sky looks so pretty and i like how you said how old she was and what her name was your story was very interesting it really hooked me in and created a picture in my mind about when were or how the story was taking place.

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