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Monday, May 18, 2020

The Box

One upon a time there was an old man named Ben. He was worried all morning
about the mouse in his house. He really wanted to get rid of him because he didn't
want an animal to live in his house. So he made a plan to trap the little
chubby mouse. 10 minutes later, knowing that he is ready, it is time for him
to hide so the mouse couldn't see him.


It was 12:30 pm. That was the time to trap the mouse
but Ben wanted to check first if Tom the mouse would come out.
He was really waiting for Tom to come, then he heard Tom's tiny footsteps.
When Tom came out on his little passageway, he was really hungry.
So he sniffed for food then he ran towards the
kitchen table to grab some yummy snacks
but when Tom heard Ben breathe heavily he stopped climbing and
looked at the furniture. Luckily Ben hid as quick as he could, but he
carried
on until he made it to the top.


He was proud of himself to find this old apartment because it has all he
needs, out he didn't realise that Ben was setting a trap for him but while
Tom was walking towards it he saw it but he don't know what it is so he go and
check if its safe then he go inside it Ben was very happy for a second because
the box haven't closed yet but he wait and wait then it finally closed, 2 minutes later, he
started dancing with a huge smile on his face he was really
happy that his trap worked.


He realised that what is he going to do with Tom? He was upset because
he doesn't have a place to go anymore because he is about to kick him out
of his house but he thought to himself what can go wrong if I leave him outside?
Then he saw the box moving so he stopped it and grabbed a newspaper so that
Tom would not escape from the bottom.
Then he opened the window and placed him outside
the window so he could open the box.

He open the box and then he heard a stray cat say [Meowing loudly] then he
close it again and put to his table, that night he was staring
at the box the whole time then he was thinking something he thinks that Tom can't
breath so he go to the kitchen the thing that he grab was really sharp
then he put it in the air and smash it to the box but the box
wasn't really smashed he just put holes on it.


He realise that he needed some food to give to Tom, and also
some water but when Ben give it to him he throw it out of the
box when he check the box and open it he saw Tom looking
cross but he gave him the small piece again but he ignored it but
when Ben grab the piece he show Tom that he will finish all the food
and show him that it's yummy and delicious.


Tom was sad because he ate it but Ben magic it back to his hand and then
Tom was very surprised to see it then Ben put it close to Tom and Tom
was very happy so he grabbed it and bring it where he was
standing and eat it, Ben was proud of what he did and he thinks that
Tom will allowed him to pet him at the back but Tom was terrified so he ran
away from him then Ben was sad because all he
wanted was a friend.


2 hours later, Ben was sleeping in his chair with the TV on, not off
and leaving some crumbs just in case Tom wanted to eat them, then
Tom came back! And maybe he smelled those crumbs he ran
quietly to not wake him up when he grabbed the food
then he looked at Ben like he was going to say thank you so when
Tom was walking away then Ben opened his eyes and saw him living with
the crumbs then he slept a nice and peacefully. THE END

1 comment:

  1. WOAH this is long lol! I think the story is cute.

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