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Friday, May 1, 2020

Catching it

One and hot shiny morning. Inside the cave full of meerkats they live at the desert with not much trees but a lot of rocks, when the leader of the meerkats was awake he started to look outside the cave to see if it's OK to come out then when the other meerkats woke up they knew that their leader was done checking outside, the other meerkats started to take a look outside the same thing has what their leader did they do that just to double check if it safe to come out, when they were done checking they jump out of there caves and run towards the tree that had one fruit left for them to eat they were also taking care of it until it's time to eat it, so they climbed the tree to see if it's still very good first they need to smell it.

Then they climbed down to look at it the whole afternoon, but something ruined their concentration so they ran all the way back to their caves to see who or what was disturbing them when they were looking at the fruit, when they look clearly at it they realise that it was a vulture they were scared of his sharp claws and his scary looking eyebrows it was darker than any vulture had ever seen before.

When the vulture landed safely to the tree he was surprised to see a lot of meerkats he was wondering why are they looking at him like that the vulture knew why there were so scared because they think the vulture is going to eat the fruit, so the vulture grabbed the fruit with his sharp claws and flew away laughing at them, but the meerkats wasn't going to let the vulture take it so they went to get it back.

The meerkats was really fast that they could stopped him but the vulture was flying higher than a crazy little meerkat thought it was a great idea to get it by jumping to the vulture's claw but the vulture pushes him off but he was still OK, then they all do it they were jumping to his claw one by one it got a little heavy for the vulture and couldn't fly nicely so he try to shake them all but they wouldn't let go off the vulture's claw. The vulture was getting annoyed with them so he let go of the fruit to get them off then one of the meerkat caught it and hug it the vulture was looking at the meerkats to see who got the fruit, when the vulture saw it he went down to get it back but the meerkats was keep on passing the fruit to each other so the vulture couldn't get it by the time they past it to the last person the vulture got it but the vulture miss and dropped it to the ground but the vulture wouldn't like the fruit to be smash so he flew down to get it, when he got it back the meerkats was doing a acrobatic on his back but the vulture stop flying so they can come off but the vulture wasn't looking where he was going so he smashes his face at the side of a cliff that's when the meerkats realise that he drop the fruit so one of them get but the fruit went over him, then three meerkats saw it coming their way so they team up to catch it then they started to past it to each other one of them was having so much fun that he kicked it higher to the sky and fly all the way to those two trees that looking like the one on T.V then they scored but when they look at the fruit it was smashed to the ground. The End

The vulture has a evil face and it
has a scary looking. And these are the Meerkats that is always silly and
loves to play around and very cute.

4 comments:

  1. Kia ora Vernon, I can tell you have worked really hard on this piece of writing. You have used some great adjectives to help me imagine this story in my mind. Have you read this story to your brother and sister?
    Miss Williamson

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  2. Hi Vernon
    Good work completing your writing and getting it posted on your blog. Remember to proof read for punctuation when you are checking your work. There don't seem to be many full stops. If you read it out loud you might get puffed as there is no where to take a breath. I like how you have added some pictures of the meerkats and the vulture.
    Mrs Jones

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    1. I forgot to put it because I have much things to finish in the house.

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